Wednesday 3 July 2019

Reasons why I do not want to live in this horrible house,


I do not want to live in this horrible house because the roof is falling apart under 
the weight of the grass growing on top of it.The wood is rotten and about to fall down.The roof tiles
are crumbling and have made giant leeks in the roof. The windows are smashed it will be cold damp
and full of rats. It is also over grown by grass and vines. It will also be impractical to cepe it around
because it can fall down at any moment.

The surrounding country is so horrible it will be crole to take any animals there. The grond is so
moody and unstable so you can not set any new foundations.  It is so une level that it will be so hard
and impractical to travel.

There is no alutristy so you do not know what the weather is going to do. You have no roof access.
no friends or family to keep you company.

3 comments:

  1. Kia Ora Harry, This is an amazing piece of writing which has persuaded me to think about this antiquated (just thought I would pop a new word in there as you have used so many new words in yur writing) house from a different point of view.
    Cheers

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  2. Hi, Harry
    i really like this comment I have noticed well constructed paragraphs.

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  3. Hi. Harry I like your slide it is VERY interesting but the picture really gives me the creeps but i really like your work that you have done on your work it really cool.

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Thank-you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.