Barry's raffle

We've  been writing about our holidays. We had to include a fictional and a true part into our storyboard then we had to create a name for our character. There is three characters in mine Mr Gold Barry and Jon.

Reasons why I do not want to live in this horrible house,

I do not want to live in this horrible house because the roof is falling apart under 

the weight of the grass growing on top of it.The wood is rotten and about to fall down.The roof tiles
are crumbling and have made giant leeks in the roof. The windows are smashed it will be cold damp
and full of rats. It is also over grown by grass and vines. It will also be impractical to cepe it around
because it can fall down at any moment.

The surrounding country is so horrible it will be crole to take any animals there. The grond is so
moody and unstable so you can not set any new foundations.  It is so une level that it will be so hard
and impractical to travel.

There is no alutristy so you do not know what the weather is going to do. You have no roof access.
no friends or family to keep you company.

Introduction

From my point of view the great walk is a gredfull idea because it will
damage the environment.

Firstly the great walk will attract freedom campers so there will be less parking spas on the

side of the rood. You will also have to book in avants to your hick because it will be too hard

to book huts. There will also be more people driving on the wrong side of the rood. 

Secondly people will group more rubbish plotting our environment and killing the animals.
People will also uses more fuel to get to the trak sending toxic gases into the air. People will also cut

down more trees to make way for the track.

Finally people will help spread karydiback while walking the track killing native trees. People will

also go off the track and stand on baby plants then they will get them salvs lost. Also people will need
to burn more wood to cepe the fire going sending more toxic gases into the air.

        Conclusion 

In conclusion the great walk is a horrible idea because freedom campers

pollution and environmental damage are destroying the environment.