Wednesday 3 July 2019

Introduction


From my point of view the great walk is a gredfull idea because it will
damage the environment.

Firstly the great walk will attract freedom campers so there will be less parking spas on the
side of the rood. You will also have to book in avants to your hick because it will be too hard
to book huts. There will also be more people driving on the wrong side of the rood. 


Secondly people will group more rubbish plotting our environment and killing the animals.
People will also uses more fuel to get to the trak sending toxic gases into the air. People will also cut
down more trees to make way for the track.


Finally people will help spread karydiback while walking the track killing native trees. People will
also go off the track and stand on baby plants then they will get them salvs lost. Also people will need
to burn more wood to cepe the fire going sending more toxic gases into the air.

        Conclusion 
In conclusion the great walk is a horrible idea because freedom campers
pollution and environmental damage are destroying the environment.

1 comment:

  1. Kia Ora Harry,
    This looks like a you followed the plan we discussed. I think you have followed the structure of a persuasive piece of writing very well.
    Cheers

    ReplyDelete

Thank-you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.