Wednesday 14 August 2019

Show not tell

We have been learning about show not tell over the past few weeks. This is my finished work.

5 comments:

  1. Hi Harry,
    Thanks for sharing your learning. I have noticed an improvement with your spelling and staying on task. Ka pai

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  2. hi harry
    I like your show not tell and i like how you 2 sides.One for show and one for tell.πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸš€πŸš€πŸš€

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  3. Hi Harry.
    I love the way you have shown your emotions its amazing, but there's one thing you need to do, is that your spelling isn't really correct, although i really liked it.
    - Jorgen

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  5. Hi Harry
    I love the way how you explain the emotions maybe next time you can get people guessing about what the last emotion is.
    from Alex

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Thank-you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.