The Hungry Squirrel

The Hungry Squirrel

Early one morning near the edge of the forest a tiny squirrel was foraging for nuts.

While high above him a giant hawk was circling for food. The squirrel sensed something.               

He lifted his tail and slowly raised his head. Danger! He caught a glimpse of a giant hawk.

His fur stood on end. He was very frightened. His eyes widened and he spread his legs       ready to run.

The hawk’s had yellow eyes and has a yellow beak.

Then hawk saw the squirrel. The squirrel darted up a tree but the hawk found him so he speed into the forest.  The hawk  spotted him.

The hawk grabbed him by his bushy tail but he scratched the hawk’s foot and the squirrel fell into a tree. He watched the hawk fly away. Then continued foraging for nuts.  

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At 8:30 in the morning Lochy arrived at my place. We packed some scooters and skateboards.

Then we went to pick Deakyn up and drove on to Reefton Skatepark.

This was going to be the perfect day.

We played in the very big dome before we got the scooters and rode down some steep ramps.

I could hear Deakyn  skidding his shoes as he was trying to get out.

I could see Lochy going down a ramp on a skateboard while using his bake.

I could feel the wind blowing on my face.  It felt cold.

This was the perfect day.

The Perfect Day

I am learning to make my writing more interesting for the reader.

I know I will be able to do this when I add more detail, interesting words and include what I see, hear, smell and feel.

At 8:30 in the morning Lochy arrived at my place. We packed some skates and skateboards.

The we went to pick up Deakyn and drove on to Reefton Skatepark.

This was going to be the perfect day.

We played in the very big dome before we got the scooters and rode down some ramps.

I could hear Deakyn skidding his shoes.

I could see Lochy going down a ramp on a skateboard.

I could feel the wind blowing on me.

This was the perfect day.

Thirsty

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Hello, my name is Harry.

I like to go on the computer. I am in year 4 at Paparoa Range School.

I like to play with my brother and spend time with Mum and Dad.

The best place to visit is my great Aunty’s place.  She is so kind.     

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